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Showing posts with label Narrative. Show all posts

Friday, 29 August 2014

Deceiving Clown

We were walking down the street when it happened. At first we didn’t believe Tom because he said he sees a clown at the end of the street carrying something. Most of us couldn’t see him so Tom couldn’t prove it. Then as we got closer his face got clearer. He snapped his head towards us with a weird look on his face.

As we started to run the other way, we ended up splitting into pairs. I could hear the clown laugh. There was something different how he laughed but I couldn’t put my finger on it. So I just ran as fast as I could with Tom. Hopping fences and bushes trying to lose the clown.

Tom told me we should hide in a house. I knew it was a bad idea but I didn’t complain, I was tired anyway. Thom saw a house with an open window. He climbed in. Quickly opened the door. Understanding what he meant I ran in, closed the door. Double locking it.

I heard a knock. “I know you’re in there!” A voice called out. I sneaked a look out the window. It was the clown! “I didn’t mean to scare you guys. I was going to give candy” Tom believed him so he opened the door and got out. I also got out but doubtfully. Then I remembered he wasn’t laughing “evil” instead it was cheerful.

He left us. I told Tom that we should look for the others and tell them. We found Alex up a tree but I had a really bad feeling. Someone was following us. “Click” ”BANG! BANG! BANG!”

Tuesday, 29 July 2014

A Dog Ate My Homework

It all started last Friday. There I was stepping along confidently, Clutching my homework in my hand. I have to say I was pleased with it. I’d spent hours finishing it the night before.

I don’t know what it was doing in my hands because it should’ve been in my bag. But man I was stupid. Once I saw the dog I knew I was already in trouble. It was the town’s most vicious dog. He was one of the biggest dog I’ve seen. He had his mouth open and I saw the sharp yellow teeth drooling with slobber.

I knew I shouldn’t run, but my feet started moving before I could think. It felt like it was second nature. The dog instinctively ran after me. Soon he caught up with me but instead of biting my leg off, he ripped my homework off my hand and ran off. I was left with a slobbery piece of paper. “No! I’m good as dead if Mister finds out that a dog ate my homework,” I thought. “I mean that is the worst reason why I didn’t bring my homework even if it’s true or not,”

Thursday, 28 November 2013

The Forbidden Lion

As the other lionesses hunt, Mystic was left behind, pregnant. Her mate, the leader of her tribe, Mamba was also with her waiting for their new trio of cubs to come out of her bulging tummy.


“ROAR!!!!!” Mystic growled as the first cub came out. She was a bit quieter when the second came out but the last one took some effort but to their surprise the last cub was WHITE! It was very rare to have a white cub but was also believed as a curse to the lions. Since their last cub was white they decided to hide it and not tell anyone else.


As the two cubs grow in freedom the white cub now named Ariel (God’s lion, lion of god in Hebrew) was forced to grow in hiding making it very difficult to learn anything. So Mystic and Mamba let his brother and sister play with Ariel for a bit but as he grew older, stronger and bigger it was harder to hide him.


The other tribe members was getting suspicious and one of them saw something white and alive so he told everyone. They figured that it was a white lion and started to rebel against Mamba and his mate Mystic. They finally gave in, sad and worried because Ariel was barely 2 years old and hasn't learnt how to hunt. He only knew how to protect himself from lions that can threaten him.


“A-a-Ariel. My s-s-son,” Mystic stuttered as tears fell from her eyes.
“What’s the problem mum? Why are you crying?!” Ariel ask curiously.
“It’s ... It’s you,” Mystic paused, taking a deep breath then said. “The others found out. We have to forbid you from the tribe and be left in the wild,” She burst into tears and hugged her son tightly for the last time.


Alone, abandoned, sent away by his own tribe and not to be seen again. Not knowing his fate, he set off to venture into the unknown.

Tuesday, 19 November 2013

The Life Changing Shoe

Everyone was bored to death in chemistry and everyone was waiting for the lunch time bell to ring, especially James. James is a tall year 9 student with black hair, blue eyes and have a pale skin tone. He was counting down in his head. “RINGGGGG!” Went the bell. Everyone was relieved and got up.

Everyone ran out of class and among them was James. As he was crossing his school’s huge basketball court to get to his friends, he came across a very flash pair of basketball shoes. It was dark red and black, the colour was complemented with very simple yet very original designs. So he took it and went to show his friends.

When his friends saw the shoes they all went crazy. One of the boys got so jealous that he snatched it away. James got so angry that he threw a punch at him. They got into a big fight but fortunately the duty teacher was there and stopped them from knocking each other out.

One of the boys was smart enough to take the shoes and give it to the lost property where no one else will find it.The principal had James and his friend run 7 laps everyday after school for 2 months because they were fighting.

Two months later. They learnt not to take things that don't belong to them and one of them is now the fastest runner in the school. He also got an opportunity to represent the country in the Olympics and won bronze medals.